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October 31, 2010

Fragment 4 - The Fire

The smell of cinders. That unmistakable odor of dried wood burning upon a pyre. There was no smoke, no towering flames, just that scent. It covered the town and the plains in a blanket of hot air.

It was sudden, but as soon as Doris had caught wind of it, creeping through her open windows, she rushed outside, eyes searching for the source, darting about wildly. The distant cries of 'fire' could be heard all around. As if by instinct, she rushed towards the library. That was when she seemed to enter the cloud. A rain of falling ashes, the pages of the books inside lit aflame. The sounds of shrill screams and cries filled the air, and the crackle of the fire that engulfed the large building. Her legs buckled and gave way as she sunk to the ground, unable to tear her eyes from the scene in front of her.

"Doris!" She heard a small cry behind her, steadily getting louder as the sound of quick footsteps entered her ears. "What happened!?"

Her eyes shot back, the voice finally cutting through her shock. "Page!?" She could feel a wave of relief wash over her, but it was soon replaced ultimately by worry and fear. "Quickly, we must get out of here!" She took the girl's hand and took off at a run, leading them back to her shop as fast as their legs could carry them.

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"How could this have happened!?" "Aren't we supposed to be protected from this?" "Why would they come here!?"

"Quiet! Quiet!" The mayor called loudly over the crowd. The meeting house was packed full, wall to wall people shouting, others whispering among themselves. "Quiet I say!" The crowd drew to a hush.

It had been just a day since the mysterious fire that burned down the old library, the smell of burning books and bodies still filling the streets. It was horrific. Just before the incident, the library was trespassed upon by seventeen men in white robes, each carrying a laurel in one hand, and an olive branch in the other. Not much else was known about what happened, but they locked the doors, and lit the building on fire, killing all of its occupants and destroying the building. There were but a few survivors, all were in too critical a condition to speak.

This was no secret organization. They were the law, the peace keepers. They were The Order.

"Why would they come here!?" Cried one woman. "We have done nothing wrong!"

But they were here. For one reason. Page.

October 30, 2010

More Updates

While we wait for more Character Bios to go up and for Crinoline's next Fragment piece, I thought I would mention that (in case no one noticed) I added a music player at the VERY bottom of the website.  It's just a quick collection of stuff I found on a site called Playlist.com that allows you to embed music players into your website.

So if you are ever low on inspiration, maybe some of it will help.  Also, if there are specific songs you would like me to try to add to the playlist, I can search for them and add them to it.  Just comment the song name or artist below and I'll see if the site has any of those songs available to add to the playlist.

October 28, 2010

Fragment 3 - Unexplained Events

We all knew Page was “different”. Weird things just seem to happen whenever she is around. The first time I noticed, Page was pouring a man a flagon of ale, but when he drank it, it had become water. I thought she had merely grabbed the wrong pitcher. Later that week she sat next to the window and the flower pot began sprouting Lilies. As the months went by, these “oddities”, became more and more frequent. Butterflies often came in through the windows and created images on the walls, items on the counters would shift into various animal shapes, or it would snow in the kitchen when it was the middle of summer. I even saw some of my books rewrite their own endings. No one ever said anything. Most people would pretend these things weren’t happening because it clearly made Page uncomfortable. However sometimes I could not help but be surprised. One evening, when I was making an apple pie, a raven flew on the window sill and asked me how my day was going. I screamed so loud I think I almost sent half my kitchen staff to the morgue. Apart from these occurrences, Page was an average girl and a joy to have at the Inn. Her eyes were a vibrant blue, dark and mysterious, but behind the surface there was a spark of energy I have never seen in another person. My husband and I soon grew to love her and thought of her as our own daughter, as I could not have one of my own. That is why I was so troubled the day SHE came.

~*~

The lounge of the Library was dark and musty. Dark shadows danced on the walls, mocking the few lamps that were used mainly for reading. Two elderly women sat under the cathedral domed glass ceiling in the center of the lounge. Their old fashioned, mahogany table was illuminated by one lamp and was being used as a battle ground for black and white stone figures. The woman playing the white pieces was Pemrose. She was a large, stocky woman with a round friendly face and a booming laugh that would fill up any room. Her white, peppered hair was short and bounced with every chortle resonating form her deep voice. The woman playing the black pieces was Joyce. She showed her age very well. She was average height and weight with short, curly, mocha colored hair lightened by age. She tapped her long fingernails on the surface of the table as she thought of her next move.

A silky soft voice came from a large cushioned chair near a large bookshelf on the south end of the lounge, “I think we should tell her.” The voice belonged to Clara. She was the youngest of the librarians with long blond hair, streaked with silver and always in a braid, tied with a large black bow at the top.

“You know we all agreed to tell her when she came of age.” Joyce responded to Clara’s question as she had finally made her move. “Rook to D5,” she said to Pemrose in a soft direct voice.

Clara put down the book she was reading. “But all the children her age make fun of her. I think she has a right to know why she is different.”

“I’ve caught her snooping around the fiction section more and more,” Pemrose spoke this time, making her move right after. “Knight takes Bishop.”

“We can not tell her until she is sixteen,” said a sharp direct voice from the entrance of the room. Agatha had just walked in and heard the last parts of the conversation and guessed what the others were talking about. She was tall, slender women with very distinct features and short, straight black hair, untouched by age.

“But she is nearly fifteen,” Clara spoke up again, this time quieter, as if intimidated by Agatha’s presence, “and the lunar eclipse is coming next Fall. That is the perfect time for her ‘Right of Passage Ceremo…’.”

“Absolutly not.” Agatha interrupted. “She is too young and she has not developed enough.”

“She shows signs of power every day,” Clara spoke up again, regaining a bit of confidence, “and it is only a matter of time before…”.

“Enough.” This time Amy spoke up. The sharp snap of her voice, silent up ‘til now, spoke up from the large throne like chair in front of the fireplace. “She is not yet of age and we have other concerns right now.”

“But what if she discovers for herself?” Pemrose spoke up. I’ve done my best until now but I can’t watch her all the time.”

Amy stood up from her chair, pushing most of her weight on the falcon cane she uses to walk, a recent development she was still getting used to. Her frail body swayed slightly as she took a few, careful steps toward the center of the room. Although she was now 97 she still dressed pristinely and had her hair in intricate buns every day. “That shouldn’t be a problem, I’ve removed all the books pertaining to her development.”

There was a unified gasp around the room. Pemrose was shocked, Joyce had a look of terror, and Clara shivered up and down. Even Agatha, whose appearance rarely changed from different shades of serious, was looking very concerned. “But that will disrupt the entire balance of the Library. That is going to leave the entire town unprotected.”

“I know,” said Amy. “I was hoping to tell you all later, but since you know you can all help me find another way to restore the protection.”

“This is far too dangerous.” Joyce had totally forgotten her game and was now looking right at Amy. “We should return the books back to their rightful spots, we don’t know what will happen if we…”.

“You don’t think I know this,” Amy stated with a somber look.

“How could you put the entire town in danger like this?” asked Agatha. “What if…”.

“Stop.” Amy interrupted. “There will be no more of this conversation. What’s done is done. Now we need to figure out what is next.”

~*~

Doris was polishing some silverware, pondering the mysterious events going on in town. Lately there were things that were down right “ominous”. Evalynn, the florist, had her entire greenhouse destroyed by a grub never seen in this Country. Mr. Roberts, the fisherman, caught and entire days catch of fish with only half of their bodies. The baker has been complaining because no matter what he does he can’t get his cakes to stop tasting like ash. Rumors began spreading that it was Page, but most of the villages knew better. Doris sent Page home for the day because the rumors were getting to her and it was a slow day at the Inn.

Doris was just about finished with her daily cleanup when there was a commotion outside. There was a lot of yelling and what sounded like things breaking when all of a sudden the door bust open. Beneath the archway was an exotically dressed woman and behind her Doris could make out an exquisitely crafted, black horse-drawn carriage. There was a small man running about screaming at all the patrons on the street, something about moving the sales carts, Doris couldn’t really make it out with all the commotion. The woman took a delicate step into the Inn and shut the door behind her. Only then was Doris able to make out what she looked like. She was tall and voluptuous. Her feet were adorned with black leather high heels which began at the floor and ended just below her curved hips. She wore a silky purple dress slatted up the sides and corseted at the top. Black gloves covered her hands and went the length of her forearm. Straight black hair cascaded from her perfectly featured face and gently caressed the top of her breasts. A large blue lizard sat upon her bare shoulder.

This mystery woman took a look around the Inn and gave what appeared to be a look of disgust. “Where is she?” she asked in a calm smooth voice.

Doris was taken aback by this woman and asked politely, “who are you looking for?”

“The girl.” the woman responded in a harsh tone.

“We have many girls in this village, I’m afraid you will have to be more specific than that.” Doris responded in kind.

“The girl with magical abilities.” The woman seemed to be getting agitated.

At first Doris laughed at the mere thought of someone talking about magic, but then she thought of Page. Doris had never considered magic before. She replied, “I’m not sure who you are speaking of.”

The woman walked slowly to one for the forks that had mysteriously twisted itself into a symbol of some sort while in Page’s presence. Doris had hung many of them as decorations around the Inn. She smiled slightly, “Don’t play coy with me woman, I know the Sprite is here! If not here, somewhere in this town.”

At that moment the door flew open and the small man came rushing in. “Mistress we must go, the crowd is getting restless.”

“Very well, I’m getting sick of this form anyway. How humans can stand it I have no idea?” She turned toward Doris one last time and looked her right in the eyes. Her eyes were blue and very similar to Page’s, but instead of being soft and vibrant they were alive with energy, almost as though there were a lightning storm brewing underneath. “If I find out you are protecting her, you will be very sorry.” In that moment all the windows shattered and before Doris knew what had happened she was gone.

~*~

Page sat under and old oak with one leg on a rock and the other leg suspended under the surface of a babbling brook. A small ring of ice crystals formed around her ankle and would occasionally break off, floating down stream, reflecting light like small diamonds in the light. It was a nice day and she was grateful Doris gave her some time to be by herself. The librarians could be really controlling and she was behind in her studies so it was good to get a chance to relax and read by the water. This was her favorite spot and could calm her no matter what was going on.

Today was hard to focus though. Strange things were happening in town and people were starting to point their gaze at her. She couldn’t help what happened around her and she wished more than anything she was normal. Of course it didn’t help the librarians named her Page. No matter where she went she got unwanted attention.

It wasn’t all bad to be different, she thought, as she watched two squirrels doing pirouettes and dancing with each other while a group of toadstools bobbed up and down as if to music. For a moment Page was at peace but then something changed, something was different, something bad had happened and she felt unsettled. She stood up quickly and ran as fast as she could toward town.

New Page Elements!


I just added a widget that I can link important posts too, such as the character bios!

I'm not sure if anyone else can update them, but just post a revision on the main page when you have them and I can update the linked bio.  I can also include multiple posts together, like making large chapters and linking them together!

Also...

I'm so glad Will took initiative to post his creative spur-of-the-moment 'prolouge' to his character!!!!  I'm not sure when or where it takes place, but I think it's well worth the read!!!

I do want to emphasize that the character bios should be completed FULLY before you start writing!  I know we all have a sense of what our character's are like in OUR heads, but it helps the rest of us better understand your character when we decide to write about them.

Do you think you guys can post your bios by the end of the weekend?

TITLE HERE

The orange and yellow leaves fall gently, floating to the ground and coming to rest, for the moment, at the feet of two humans. They appear ready, circling the clearing, looking for an opening. One stands flat footed holding a long bladed sword with both hands; he is all covered in steel plates, ready. He seems steady, like a rock or mountain, prepared for anything short of a meteor. The other is dancing on his toes, back and forth, kicking leaves in all directions. He holds in one hand a cruel ax, and in the other a deadly looking short blade, his green leather armor is in sharp contrast to the orange and yellow oak leaves that fall around him.

The green armored man lunges quite suddenly at the rock like man. Green thrusts with his blade, a low strike aimed at the less armored legs of Rock, who jumps out of the way at the last second, but not quick enough. Green brings his ax down towards the skull of Rock, but with a fast flick of his hands turns the ax away; sparks shear down towards the ground and a horrible screeching sound erupts out of the relative silence from the two weapons colliding. With a shout of anger, Rock counters with two handed swing towards the wrist of Green, aiming to dismember the smaller man, however, Green is far to nimble for a simple slash to reach his flesh. He ducks and twists while bringing the short blade around for another slash, this time at the chest of Rock. The power behind the swing is to great for Rock to parry another attack, even though he sees it clearly. The blade connects with his chestplate, gouging a large scrape across the front, but hardly causing a flinch in Rocks positioning. With a shout, he bringing the large sword around and down, this time trying to cleave Green in two; Rock slams the blade into the spot the nimble man once was. With a loud thunk, the blade hits dirt.

Green had already rolled away after the short blade had connected with his opponent and now he stands ready and rolls his ax in his hand, and grins. Infuriated, Rock charges at Green and swings his large blade, held in both hands over his head. Green stands his ground until the last possible second, and parries the heavy blow with his ax, moving the blade with deft expertise; Green stabs into Rock, around the heavy chestplate and into the softer chainmail at the joints of his shoulder. The blade sinks into flesh and an intake of breath signals the painful wound inflicted on Rock who tries to push Green away and disarm him at the same time. They exploit fails and Green lands another blow against Rock, but this time with his ax against the large mans right forearm.

The blow causes a howl of pain, as Rock stumbles away, blood falling to the leaves in splatters of crimson on the yellow and orange. Green follows in with a killing blow, but is stopped short by a flash of light and heat near his face. A man with spikes on his shoulders, a leather strap with spikes covering his eyes, and robes covering his slender frame has stepped out of the trees towards the clearing. Spike takes another step forward, and even though he has his eyes covered by a strap, he looks at Rock, nods and readies his hands. Rock, grinning, looks into Greens eyes, and shouts, swinging his blade in fast and crazed arcs towards the legs of his opponent. Green jumps back easily, and as he hits the ground a few feet away, Spike makes a nimble gesture with his fist and a bolt of fire shoots from his knuckles towards the quick man, who is forced, again, to dodge away. The bolt of fire explodes a tree into cinders at the edge of the clearing, the remaining leaves and the tree itself falls to the ground into the circle of battle. As Rock continues to charge at Green, Spike fires more and more bolts of energy, forcing Green to dodge more, repeating the cycle, however, he appears to be to quick for either blade or fire to catch him even once. Upon closer inspection, Green is sweating with exertion, his breathing is heavy, and his grip on his weapons is only for the purpose of fearing the loss of his weapons.

They circle twice around the clearing, causing more trees to explode and more leaves to be crushed under the boots of these three men. Rock forces Green to dodge to hastily and is rewarded by seeing the quick man fall to the ground harshly on his stomach. Spike capitalizes on the opportunity and sweeps his hand in an arc towards a prone and vulnerable Green. A wall of force pushes the leaves away and flips green into the air, the wind knocked out of him and a nasty looking bruise forming on his face. Rock and Spike grin, and close in for the kill, when out of the woods some slender object slams into Spikes left leg, causing him to shout in agony and spin to the the ground himself. Rock spins to stand over his fallen companion and to face this new threat.

A woman is leaning out from the trees notching another arrow into her large bow. She is wearing similar armor to Green, but instead of a sharp contrasting color, it is a camouflaged and hooded cloak with yellow and orange leather underneath. Hood leans forward and aims at Rock who raises his left shoulder to cover his head. The arrow slams into the heavy pauldron, causing Rock to stumble almost onto Spike. By the time he is able to steady his feet again and look over his heavy armor, she has already pulled another arrow from her quiver. This time it is Greens turn to grin as he sees an opportunity to strike while his two opponents are fumbling from this ranged assailant. As he charges, Spike leans up from behind Rock and fires a series of lighting bolts towards Green, Hood misses with her arrow at Rock, who, oblivious to Greens charge, also charges at the woman at the edge of the clearing... (continued later)

October 27, 2010

Updated - Comments and Posting Alerts!


Just updated so that EVERYONE gets a comment and a post alert so we know when a new post has been published!

Also, check out my character bio!  It is finally up!

And... COMMENT AWAY!

Character Bio - Nausico

The setting my character comes from is isolated from most of the world. 

Similar to England, there are rolling hills and forests scattered along a mountain range that nearly cuts a small village community, known as the Eastern Squall, off from the rest of the known world. This results in a technologically repressed society that focuses on farming, some fishing and gathering for resources.

The land that Eastern Squall is built upon is essentially a sanctuary for pilgrims, though often they stumble upon Eastern Squall by chance more. The people from the village are very respectful of their sheltered environment and have (to some degree) managed to live in peace with the surrounding wild life without disturbing it.

  • Character Name / Nicknames / Aliases:
      Nausico
  • Birth Date:
17 years ago (Date: unknown day in December)
  • Place of Birth:
      Small village community on the coast, known as “Eastern Squall”
  • Residence:
      Currently N/A
  • Height:
      5'5”
  • Weight:
      ~105 lbs.
  • Measurements:
      (ummm...)
  • Clothing Sizes / Styles:
      Usually a Medium for a loose fit. Small for normal wear.
      Nausico is commonly seen wearing very little decoration or coloring in his clothing, preferring to stick to traditional brown or tan hemp or cotton. He wears thin shoes, short sleeves, and loose fitted pants during warmer seasons. During colder weather, he brings out a deep-grey set of tunic and pants along with thin, fingerless gloves. He doesn't own a second pair of shoes.
  • Hair Color:
      White / Platinum (Originally Dark Brown)
  • Hair Length:
      unkempt cut (due to lack of proper barbering), about 3-4 inches length with a mild mullet. Very unkempt and untrimmed.
  • Eye Color:
      Brilliant Purple (Originally Green)
  • Handedness :
      Left Handed (Originally Right)
  • Jewelry:
      N/A
  • Tattoos:
      N/A
  • General Appearance:
Nausico could easily go unnoticed in a crowd... if it weren't for his platinum hair and mysterious purple eyes!

He is average hieght, though skinny, and always seems to walk or sit in a slouching position unless the center of attention. His boy-ish face is fair, but not strikingly beautiful. Because of his hair and eyes, he is often thought to be possessed or demon-touched, which is why he often wears his tunic out of season. Nausico might be chased out of a bar, inn, shop, or town if he isn't careful to cover himself in highly suspiscious or cautious regions that display low levels of tolerance. (Meaning fearful of people 'out of the ordinary')
  • Relationship with Family:
      Nausico does not remember his childhood or most anything of his past. If he did remember, he would realize that only his Father is alive today.
  • Key Family / Relatives:
      Nausico's mother – Aurora Phae (diseased)
Nausico's father – Alkin Phae
Phae family – Unknown
Lith family (mother's side) - Unknown
  • Relationship with Friends:
      Because Nausico is different physically, he has developed a self-fulfilling prophesy of isolation. He has few, if any, real friends.
  • Key Friends:
      Yala – a small spirit (if even), inaudible, nothing more than an orb of light that seems to float aimlessly around Nausico when he is feeling isolated, alone reflection, or mediation. Having named the small light Yala himself, Nausico sometimes talks to Yala aloud to ease his tensions.
  • Key Enemies:
      Since Nausico is very 'different' physically, he is often persecuted by everyone around him. In fact, he is constantly roaming the land to escape not only persecution from other people, but also a group of men in red robes, who people refer to commonly as the “Men in Red” with their real name a closely guarded secret.

“Men in Red” – An organization, lead secretly by Nausico's father, attempting to capture Nausico for unknown reasons. Their past is heavily entwined with Nausico's, though Nausico only remembers enough to stay as far away from them as possible. And at all costs.
  • Educational History:
      Nausico's travels have given him some 'education' on what the world is like, but he also does have excellent reading and writing skills acquired from his past education from both his mother and father (both well-educated scholars).
      His mother taught him most of what he knows from childhood, his father having taken over after her passing. What he learned from his father is mostly factual. Nausico often surprises himself by recalling very specific things about places and things... without remembering how he knows about them.
  • Work History:
      Nausico has been a beggar / nomad for so long, he has extremely limited work experience. He is use to relying on himself, but understands and cares for the needs of others. He tries to help out when he can, but it inevitably leads to him being attacked more often than thanked.
  • Skills:
      Nausico has a lot of knowledge of the world around him. Though he can't always remember everything at once (and sometimes erratically due to his amnesia) he has saved himself a few times by remembering that hidden passage of old or the depth of a river across the cliff-side during an escape.

Nausico's most notable skill is more magical. He has a deep and magical connection to his surroundings and environment. This allows him to 'feel' emotions from plants and animals, sense weather changes, and more noticeably, conjure elements. Using his powers, Nausico has avoided some disastrous confrontations with large bears and dire wolves as well as avoided the occasional, unpredicated rainfall.

His elemental conjury is limited. Large manifestations only appear during extreme or life threatening situations, though he is able to make small manifestations on his own but avoids doing so in front of others to keep attention away from himself.
  • Phobias / Fears:
Nausico fears the color red, especially in robes, as they are commonly worn by the “Men in Red”.

He also fears hurting others with his magic! He tries to keep his magic constrained around other people at all times.
  • Bad Habits / Vices:
      Nausico has a bad habit of freezing up during dire situations, becoming withdrawn when confronted, and not saying anything when he really should (or saying the wrong thing)
  • Quirks:
      Nausico tends to zone out often, as if listening to something peculiar or more interesting than what you have to say. Sometimes this is true, but most of the time Nausico just finds the conversation boring. (He is a terrible conversationalist.)
  • Best Qualities:
      Kind, Respectful, Friendly, Independent, Caring, Out-Going
  • Worst Qualities:
      Shy, Timid, Weak, Ignorant, Tendency to push people away who show any affection towards him.
  • Key Childhood Experiences:
      Loss of his mother
      His father's role as his primary care-giver and educator
  • Key Teenage Experiences:
      Father's role in his past, connected ultimately to his physical appearance, amnesia, and fear of the “Men in Red”
  • Key Adult Experiences:
      Nomad wanderer, constantly escaping persecution and discrimination.
  • Sexual Background:
      Nausico hasn't really met this need (according to his 'Hierarchy of Needs'), but he shows Bisexual tendencies when the moments do arise. I give him a 3.5 on the Kinsey Scale.
  • Favorites (food, clothing, art, music, TV show, movie, book, etc.)
      Food – Sea Harvest Soup (The East Breeze version of Chowder)
      Clothing – loose fitted, preferably cotton with optional layers (hoods, sleeves, gloves)
      Art – Nausico's favorite art form is oil painting.
      Music – favorite instrument : flute or ocarina, song : he tends to make them up if he can get his hands on an instrument... he doesn't sing.
  • Personal Goals:
      Recover his memories, discover his purpose in the world, and find someone who cares for him (perhaps even love?)
  • Professional Goals:
      Become a master at conjuring the elements, Learn to speak the secret language he can barely understand, and be able to understand his magical skills overall!
  • Morality / Ethics:
      Nausico understands the value of life, but also can see both sides of the same coin. He tries not to judge people for their wrongs.
      There are some crimes that Nausico finds near unforgivable such as murder and deception (for a large personal gain), mostly if they directly involve him in some way.
  • Style of Speech:
      Brief, to-the-point, and without much elaboration. He has a hard time explaining himself.
  • Commonly Used Words / Slang / Jargon:
      “I just... wanted... I mean...”
      “Leave me alone!”
      “You're bothering me.” and usually not saying much at all. Sometimes when conjuring elements he begins to mutter to himself, although he usually isn't aware of it.
  • Lies / Misinformation:
      The “Men in Red” often try to depict Nausico as a crimal, a demon, or a magical monster. Since the average commoner isn't very familiar with magical beings (or people with platnium hair and purple eyes) they believe the claims. Because of his amnesia, Nausico has come to terms with the fact that he must be some combination of them all, but is not entirely certain.
  • Other Important Details:
      Nausico's past with his father and the “Men in Red” is something I'm working on. Hopefully this will get revealed as we progress!

IN DND TERMS:
Nausico is a Human, Sorcerer/Wizard Hybrid. He doesn't have an implement at the moment, so his magical powers are limited to what he can conjure himself. He is a basic striker with chaotic tendencies... but he hasn't proven himself much in a fight...

...yet.



IMAGE:


I really like Tsukasa's character design overall, but Nausico has no hat or tattoos.  :-D




In Summary:
Nausico is a magically attuned human with an interesting physical appearance who wanders the land looking for answers to his past while being chased around by the “Men in Red” for supposed criminal acts and 'demonic' appearance.

October 26, 2010

Cycle and Updates

Here is the new / final cycle!  If you like it, don't like it, approve or disapprove...

Comment below!!!

(notice how I keep stressing to comment yet?)


"THE CYCLE"
  1. Mr. Kyle
  2. Kodiake
  3. Spanky
  4. Crinoline
  5. Mr. N
  6. Will

Try to have your bios posted before the final fragment piece is posted by Will, alright?  I know it is a huge template... (mine is still only 3/4 done) but it is well worth it when it is done!  Good luck!

October 25, 2010

Fragment 2 - Dori

I do remember the day they found her, the whole town was fussing over it. Word spreads rather quickly around here, those librarians aren't exactly tight-lipped. 

Yet like all gossip, what is hot potatoes one day is cold soup the next...

Sorry, the name's Doris, or Dori if I like you. My husband and I run the only inn in town. It's a good sized town located on a major trade route, so we get all kinds of types in here. I cook for the guests and the townsfolk in our restaurant downstairs. It's pretty much the town's social hub. I gotta say I like all the hustle and bustle that surrounds the place, keeps things interesting.

I guess that's why she started coming around.

She was still young, a bit shy mind you... She wouldn't even set foot in the door till I made her. Liked to just sit outside and watch all the commotion though the window. She was there almost every night, but whenever I went out to try to talk to her, she just ran right off.

One night after about a month of window watching, I managed to sneak up on her...

"Pretty nice night, eh?"

"Ahhh! I'm sorry! I was just looking, I'll be off!"

"No no, It's fine. Say... What's your name?"

"My... My name? Uhh... It's not important... well... that is to say... I..."

"Alright then Miss. Mystery, why don't you come in for a cup of tea and some hot soup? You'll catch cold if you keep hanging out out here all the time."

And that was how it all began. Over the years now she has been helping out in the kitchen and inn when she can. She's very quiet about herself but loves to talk to the guests, always eager for their stories. I have to admit though, strange things seem to happen when she is around. Almost... magical things...


The order of things...

So who wants to post after Lauren?

Please comment below.

And if you want to post after the next person, post a comment about that too.

... IN FACT if you have an order preference (or lack of preference) post that too.

October 24, 2010

The Dungeon Master's Graveyard Character Bio: Ysbry

Hello all,

Thought I would get the ball rolling with a character bio, if that's all right. It made sense to me that we create the character's first, and naturally develop the world around them together (after all, they aren't created in a vacuum). So I'm going to introduce my character, and the little slice of world from which he hails.
  • In a clime similar to that of British Colombia, Canada, there is a great valley beset on three sides by mountains. The valley, called GlenRock, is the home to several small villages and farming communities. It is cut through the middle by a great, beautiful river known to the locals as Runnings River. The mountains, called Yolo by some, and Starry Mountains by others, are home to nomadic tribes who follow a simple agrarian path throughout the year. There are goliaths, humans and half-orcs, and shifter tribes of variant animal ancestry. Today, we focus on a member of the ursine, Black Paw Clan.
  • Character Name / Nicknames / Aliases: Ysbry [is-bree] Mani Watiuk [way-tee-yuk]; Ysbry Watiuk; Ysbry of the Black Paw; Hunter Watiuk
  • Birth Date: The Dark before the Corn Moon(approx. "Sept. 2nd"), nineteen summers ago
  • Place of Birth: The Toadstone cave, on the third peak of Starry Mountain
  • Residence: Starry Mountain/GlenRock Valley
  • Height:5'11"
  • Weight: 220 lbs.
  • Measurements:
biceps 17" thighs 22" chest 47" waist 38"hips 42" (He's meaty and strong, but isn't defined with "gym" muscles, there's a healthy level of fat too)
  • Clothing Sizes / Styles: Ysbry is at least an "Extra Large" in most clothing. He mostly wears caribou and goat hide for clothing, preferring pants and bare chest and feet. In the winter he covers up with woolen sweaters, and a bear fur cloak.
  • Hair Color: Black
  • Hair Length: A very short, thick, "warrior's" mohawk, the rest of his head and face is shaved daily
  • Eye Color: large, round black eyes like a bear
  • Handedness : right, though he can wield simple weapons in either hand
  • Jewelry: Two dire bear claws fashioned into trophy earrings, inherited from his father, and a beaded armband he wears on his right arm.
  • Tattoos: An eight spoke sun-wheel adorns his left shoulder, and a tribal style bear face, with five claws over it adorns his right shoulder.
  • General Appearance: Ysbry is generally an intimidating individual upon first appearance. A bare, barrel chest covered in hair, with twin cleaver-like axes strapped to his back is usually the first thing you notice. His face, while not ugly, is very somber. Dark eyes shine from under a heavy brow with thick, black eyebrows. A wide-bridged animal like nose sits long, and low on his face, and thin lips appear amidst the too-frequently shaven facial stubble. Naturally black, pointed nails on both hands and feet, and simple, brown, hide clothing complete the image.
  • Relationship with Family: Ysbry is the youngest son of Kainen (father) and Nanoda (mother, nee Nievmal) Watiuk. His father passed many years ago protecting the Clan, and Ysbry is especially close to his mother and brother because of it.
  • Key Family / Relatives:
Nanoda Watiuk- mother and provider
Yowyn (yo-win) Watiuk, eldest sibling, and shaman in training
Wenna Agalsti, aunt, shaman and leader of the tribe
  • Relationship with Friends:...
  • Key Friends: While Ysbry has a few childhood friends, one friend of note is a young dwarven woman named Brenna Irontap, who lives in Oakdale in GlenRock. She repairs the broken wheels, needles, etc. when the clan enters the valley in the spring. They enjoy good, dark beer together in the late hours, when their schedules allow.
  • Key Enemies: Despite the very extreme difficulty of passing to the other side of the mountains (those that don't face the valley are near impossible to get to with the exception of Harrow's Pass) many hobgoblin tribesman attempt raids on the nomadic tribes of Starry Mountain.
  • Educational History: Like all children in his clan, Ysbry and his brother were educated by the clan shaman from age four to twelve. At twelve, a ceremony was had to determine their career path/training. Ysbry was to become a warrior and provider like his father. While intelligent and wise situationally(an expert tracker and fighter), Ysbry is not the most educated individual around.
  • Work History: Since twelve years old, Ysbry has hunted caribou and ram, skinned and cleaned them, tracked and hunted pumas, protected the clan from bears, goblins, and hobgoblins, as well as thieves. Hunting and fighting is all he really knows.
  • Skills: see above.
  • Phobias / Fears: Uselessness and shame. While his brother goes on to become a tribal leader whom is educated, and has control over law, population, tradition, education, etc., Ysbry just kills things for a living. He hates feeling useless. Moreover, he fears shame. His father has trophies from his hunting days, and he needs to one day bring home trophies of his own. Shaming his father's name is his greatest fear.
  • Bad Habits / Vices: Ysbry is the calm fury type, he never raises his voice, and his only three visible emotions are, stoic, sleepy, and smirking slightly. If something bothers him, he will say nothing until it comes pouring out of him...usually from the sharp end of his weapon. He also tends to forget to mention important details as they're happening, such as detecting a third thief, or telling a friend "I'm covering your territory now you can go." but forgetting to tell him it's because his wife is giving birth.
  • Quirks: Ysbry, like most of his family, had the potential to be a talented shaman and spiritualist. He can speak to the primal spirits like his aunt and brother can, but only uses the ability when bored or in battle.
  • Best Qualities: Loyal, Brave, Calm, Trustworthy, and Hard-working are some of Ysbry's best qualities
  • Worst Qualities: Stoic to the point of being cold, inability to express emotions/ being distant, negligence of important details are most of his worst
  • Key Childhood Experiences: discovering his ability to commune with the primal spirits, his pride at his brother's "calling ceremony", his own ceremony etc.
  • Key Teenage Experiences: his first kill (an ornery old grey, ram), his first time into a village, discovering beer, leading his first hunt, getting his tattoo's, etc.
  • Key Adult Experiences: Ysbry's tribe practices population control (like most nomadic tribes do) One manner is that families are only allowed so many children (3), and young men (except the shaman) must go out into the world and bring back a trophy or conquest to be accepted back into the tribe. They must also choose a wife (or life partner) from another tribe/land to prevent incest. Ysbry is now of age where he must go out into the world to claim a wife, or gain a trophy. He is no longer welcome in his tribe until he does so.
  • Sexual Background: Ysbry has shared a few "nights" with his good friend Brenna, but they have mutually decided marriage is not for them. Ysbry is otherwise lacking in experience.
  • Favorites
food: goat milk, root vegetables, unleavened bread, roasted caribou shank
clothing: hides for comfort, wool for warmth
art: tattoo's are considered magical by many of the local peoples, and Ysbry loves them
music: drums! Ysbry loves drum beats, and enjoys woodwinds and cymbals/zils
  • Personal Goals: To lead a full life, and find love one day
  • Professional Goals: To find a great trophy to bring back to his people, and become his brothers food/ war adviser
  • Morality / Ethics:" Listen to nature, take no more than what is necessary, do what is for the benefit of the greater rather than the few, and what you have, you hold, and nothing more". Is one of the teaching's Ysbry knows by heart and believes. He is genuinely a moral individual, but his life has yet to present him with truly multi-faceted moral issues.
  • Style of Speech: Short, quiet, and a bit gruff. Ysbry is a young man of few words, which are occasionally sarcastic.
  • Commonly Used Words / Slang / Jargon: "Nunyinini/Wewaydo/CarundaYolo guide me." Nunyinini is his tribe's name for The Great Bear, an elder primal spirit whom the tribe venerates. They also venerate Wewaydo, Earthwheel who ensures food to eat during their yearly travels, and CarundaYolo, their name for the spirit of Starry Mountain
  • Lies / Misinformation: His mother and Aunt has never had the heart to tell him, but Ysbry's father isn't dead, he's been exiled. His brother Yowyn, also has a different father. Ysbry knows nothing of this, or why they would keep it from him..
  • Other Important Details:..... Wow, that was long, and difficult but now I feel accomplished. Sorry if this interrupts the flow of things/ is way too long.
  • Currently working on an image
  • Mechanics: In D&D 4e terms, Ysbry is a Long Tooth Shifter, and a hybrid Ranger/Seeker. He uses throwing axes and daggers to mix melee and range, being an effective warrior and hunter. He is most certainly a striker, who also calls upon primal spirit allies for some light controlling features.
Footnotes: Ysbry: bear shifter, a beefy, hairy, warrior unable to call any place home until he brings back a trophy proving he's a valued asset to his tribe.

I can't wait to read the bio of whomever is next!

October 23, 2010

Fragment 1 - Page

My name...  My name doesn't mean anything.  It just sort of falls out of your mouth and sits there, glaring at you for a while until you make a personal note not to mention it again in the near future.  Sometimes, I wish I could change it to something simple like Logan or something normal like Jess.  Jessy just has a nice ring to it.  Why couldn't they have just called me Jessy?

I guess I should mention my parents didn't give me my name.  They're both gone.  missing.  vanished.  Left me behind on those hard, marble steps with a blanket tightly winding me up like one of those bon-bons you get around Christmas time... except I was missing a label. 

They couldn't have just left some TP clinging to me with Taylor or Dylan srcibbled on it?  No.  They just had to leave me with this terrible, abominable, and repugnant title given to me by those annoying librarians.

It was the head librarian herself who both found and named me.  Her name's Amy.  Amy Jones.  She let me in early that morning.  I was allowed exclusive rights that day to visit her eighty-plus-only club.  They meet the lounge area between the Drama and Fiction sections on Tuesday and Thursday mornings around five.  Being approximately six and a half months old, I got a lot of attention.

That same morning was the day I was assigned my name.  I still can't believe they didn't even bother to check if I even had a registered name yet.  The Public Records section is just 145 feet from the end of Fiction!  They could have checked!  Anyways, the story goes that while they were deciding what to do with me they decided to give me a 'temporary' name until they could find who I belonged to.  Just temporary.

Whenever I bring it up with Amy, she goes off in her most omniscient tone with something like: "It was only suppose to be temporary dear.  We couldn't just keep referencing you like you were some sort of animal at our door step!"


But Amy thinks my name is a classic.  Pure genius on her part.  Some of the ladies hurriedly scrambled to come up with something reasonable.  They began referencing some famous names from works like Wuthering Heights and Oliver Twist, but Amy, cradling me around the lounge, wasn't satisfied.  The ladies started giving up.

Then, as Amy puts it, "It just fell into my head like a page from the rafters of this old library."

And that's how I got my name.  Page.

Good thing my best friend doesn't mind it much.

October 22, 2010

While we build our characters...

Let's practice our story building! 

If you want to participate, comment beneath this message saying you would like to do it!

(I want to see you can post comments and can post on the website!)

This story is just for kicks and will be only one response each!  Who's in?

October 20, 2010

Character Bios

Here is the basic format for your character bio.  ALSO attach a picture if you find one that looks 'similar' to the theme you were going for this character.


  • Character Name / Nicknames / Aliases:
  • Birth Date:
  • Place of Birth:
  • Residence:
  • Height:
  • Weight:
  • Measurements:
  • Clothing Sizes / Styles:
  • Hair Color:
  • Hair Length:
  • Eye Color:
  • Handedness :
  • Jewelry:
  • Tattoos:
  • General Appearance:
  • Relationship with Family:
  • Key Family / Relatives:
  • Relationship with Friends:
  • Key Friends:
  • Key Enemies:
  • Educational History:
  • Work History:
  • Skills:
  • Phobias / Fears:
  • Bad Habits / Vices:
  • Quirks:
  • Best Qualities:
  • Worst Qualities:
  • Key Childhood Experiences:
  • Key Teenage Experiences:
  • Key Adult Experiences:
  • Sexual Background:
  • Favorites (food, clothing, art, music, TV show, movie, book, etc.)
  • Personal Goals:
  • Professional Goals:
  • Morality / Ethics:
  • Style of Speech:
  • Commonly Used Words / Slang / Jargon:
  • Lies / Misinformation:
  • Other Important Details:
I got this list from the website HERE and I might have us do some of the other exercises this website lists to help develop a sense of our characters before we start.

Post your character bio as a post on the blog to get started!

October 19, 2010

The Tale Begins!

First post of many I hope!  Starting to send invites to people who's emails I have and trying to get the site setup.

More to come!